Thursday, February 23, 2012

ELA Showcase

My post Crawlers is my best creative writing becuase I made everything up like how the monsters act and look and also how they have to bekilled is very creative.

The posts A time at the fair and Crawlers Show improvement between them becuase in crawlers it's more descreptive then it is in A time at the fair also Crawlers is alot longer and well made.

Hunger games project, truth behind the fiction is my best thinking piece becuase i took all my research and put it in an informative paper along with the information from the hunger games itself.

My top three posts are Crawlers, My opinion on the Hunger Games, and Hunger Games project, truth behind the fiction are my top three post becuase I did my best to provide information, opinion, and entertainment for the reader.

Thursday, February 16, 2012

Crawlers

Author’s comment: THERE ARE A LOT OF TYPOS I WILL FIX THEM AT A DIFFERENT POINT

                                               Chapter 1: Introduction

 O.K. It’s been a year since the war “ended” BUT its effects will never go away. I can’t tell what planet this is YET, I don’t what you dieing too. O.K. enough with that lets start at when THEY used the chemicals. It was during the war of... well there isn’t a name I call it the war but i guess i can make a name for it later on in the story.
  OK on with the story the chemicals that were dropped did some crazy things it does not kill people but it does not let them have control of their own body it’s like they are being controlled by some force from within their body. They Look like regular humans but they are mad creatures they foam from the mouth with red eyes that never blink. They act like regular humans but they are a lot faster and stronger, they can’t be burned and they give no mercy. They are bloodthirsty killers and there is no cure.
   Well lets get this story started, I was sitting at home watching the news ( my parents won’t turn it off the news due to the war) when they announced the war was over but then they said for us to net leave our homes because there were some minor issues. Thats when i heard them the red eyed, foamy mouth, killers... they were screaming a loud terrible screech like nails on chalkboard. It made me cringe. I quickly jumped to the window to find out what was happening when one of these... these crawlers jumped at a car they landed doing something that looked like a crab walk. Their head could point anywhere, it could even suck it’s head back into it’s body and thats exactly what it did before it luanched its head out still attached to its neck almost a whole meter and grabbed a person. It jerked the poor man up from under his dashboard and started to drag him away in less the 3 seconds it had reached a speed of what looked like 30 MPH. I heard another scream and looked someone with a gun was shooting it in its head but it wouldn’t die! It just kept coming and coming the person was shooting and cursing becuase all the bullets did was slow them down. Someone with an axe came and chopped its head off but it kept going for them scratching and kicking then when the finally dismembered most of it’s limbs, it just stopped. The two people high fived and congratulated each other then on got jerked off of his feet and dragged up a building onto a roof the thing had stretched its neck that far! He was screaming in pain and blood was gushing everywhere then, it went silent, all you heard was his bones being crushed.

                            Chapter 2: The Escape
     I quickly ran to my mother screaming “WE HAVE TO LEAVE NOW!” she told me to calm down and asked what was wrong. I explained as fast as i could and when i was done she thought it was a lie. I took her to the window but all there was was a blood stain and a car then i saw someone walking down the street and i opened the door to ask them something. I asked them if they had seen anything happen but they didn’t respond to me. I yelled again and his head turned but not just turned it did a full turn and looked directly at me. I froze right there but the last i remember was it’s head shooting out and grabbing my mom. I was about to go and save her when it ripped her heart out. I screamed. I felt so helpless, i couldn’t even save my own mother. At that time i knew it was hopeless to go out there so i slammed the door and ran to the garage. I thought to myself i had to get ready i knew i couldnt survive more than one of them at a time so i had to be sneaky but i also needed a form of protection. I grabbed the crowbar lying on the floor it was my best bet for survival. I grabbed a large backpack and put some food and water bottles in it.
     I was thinking of staying in my house for the day then head out the next day but just then i heard a loud crash from in the living room I grabbed my crowbar along with a flashlight and went to investigate. As i reached the living room another crash came through the monsters had used thier heads to bash through the wall it saw me and i quickly ran to the back door and ran out into my yard. I completly forgot i had a fencd in back yard i had no doors on the fence so i had to make a plan and quick. I looked at my trampoline and had a great idea first i took the net off of the trampoline. I heard the scurrying of the monster and thought heh just in time. As it reached the back door and luanched its head at me i threw the net on it’s head and it got entangled. 
  
                 This is not finished this is just as far as i could make it to i will continue this story.

Thursday, February 2, 2012

A time at the fair SHORTSTORY

  I go to the fair at rare time’s,  not very often, but when I do I have alot of fun. I like to go on the ride where it spins you around really fast so at one point your weightless and the next you can’t even lift your head off of the cushion. I like to go on and the “boat” ride where it even goes upside down it is such a rush! All of the rides are super fun and I never want to leave when I'm there. I like to try my luck at the games where you hardly ever win but I always lose because they are made to be super hard to win. One thing I don’t like is when people puke because it makes that certain ride to shutdown so they can clean it up and the workers never come back for like an hour. The worst part is when we have to go home. I try to convince them to stay longer but they never do. On the way home I hope to go back and have alot of fun.